Please correct sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
SAMIL TEXTILE regrets to inform you that we can not reach the STOLL ABRASION test
at CONVERSE standard.
Slave Swan(SI 9988) is made of 100% natural cotton yarn and it’s easy to wear out and not strong enough compare to synthetic fabric.
Besides, it has loose textile weave.
So, it's hard to improve the abrasion result better than now.
We have to use thicker yarn or different weaving way to improve it, but we're afraid this way will bring about different quality.
Please make allowance for these reasons and accept the following Converse test result.
Stoll Abrasion : 17 cycles
Your big help and cooperation would be highly appreciated.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello Boomin,
I am so happy that you had time to send a composition. I hope my corrections will help you at work. Please feel free to send more compositions that needed some grammar corrections. See you in class!
T.Sheela
SAMIL TEXTILE regrets to inform you that we can not reach the STOLL ABRASION test at CONVERSE standard.
>> Correct!
>>OR SAMIL TEXTILE regrets to inform you that we can not reach the STOLL ABRASION TEST to have a formal conversation.Slave Swan(SI 9988) is made of 100% natural cotton yarn and it’s easy to wear out and not strong enough compare to synthetic fabric. >>Slave Swan(SI 9988) is made of 100% natural cotton yarn and it’s easy to wore out because it is not strong enough comparing to synthetic fabric. Besides, it has loose textile weave.
>> Correct!So, it\'s hard to improve the abrasion result better than now. >> So, it\'s hard to improve the result of abrasion now.
>>OR So,it\'s hard to fix the result of abrasion now.We have to use thicker yarn or different weaving way to improve it, but we\'re afraid this way will bring about different quality.>>We have to use thicker yarn or different way of weaving fix it, but we\'re afraid that this way will bring a different quality to the product.Please make allowance for these reasons and accept the following Converse test result.>>Please consider these reasons and accept the following converse test result.
>>OR Please consider these reasons and accept the following results of our conversation.Stoll Abrasion : 17 cycles>>Correct!Your big help and cooperation would be highly appreciated.>>Your big help and cooperation will be highly appreciated.Thank you.
>>Correct!
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