Please correct some sentences i made :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Why did you choose this program?
A. Because I’m a UI designer and while working as a UI designer i felt that i need to learn UX design too for becoming a good designer
Q. What is UI design?
A. It means User interface design and UI designers are think about icons and buttons and typography color schemes and so on
강사 첨삭
Good evening, One! ^-^
Try to keep your sentences fairly short by tackling one main idea per sentence.
Cut out or drop unnecessary words. Also, don\'t forget to use punctuation.
Thank you for this composition. See you later in class!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
Q. Why did you choose this program?
A. Because I’m a UI designer and while working as a UI designer i felt that i need to learn UX design too for becoming a good designer
A. Because I’m a UI designer and while working as a UI designer i felt that i need to learn UX design too for becoming a good designer
>>> I chose it because I\'m a UI designer, and while working as a UI designer, I felt that I needed to learn UX design too to become a good designer.
Q. What is UI design?
A. It means User interface design and UI designers are think about icons and buttons and typography color schemes and so on
>>> OR: I chose it because, as a UI designer, I believed that, in order to improve as a designer, I also needed to study UX design.
Q. What is UI design?
A. It means User interface design and UI designers are think about icons and buttons and typography color schemes and so on
>>> UI means user interface, and UI designers consider icons, buttons, typography, color schemes, and other elements.
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