Please correct the sentence I made

2021-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

What is the most difficult thing about learning English? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences. I n my opinion, the most difficult thing about learning English is trying not to make mistakes. As I mentioned to you, whenever i speak in English i get nervous. There are so many Korean employees who speak good English well around me. That makes me always get nervous. That\'s the one of the reason I take this class to improve my English ability.

강사 첨삭

Hello again, Mr. [이름]. I am glad to read your immediate response to the homework topic. Here are the corrections. If you have any questions about them, we can discuss them in class tomorrow. Have a good night and see you tomorrow. ~Jane c\",)


In my opinion, the most difficult thing about learning English is trying not to make mistakes.
>> CORRECT

As I mentioned to you, whenever i speak in English i get nervous.
>> As I mentioned to you, whenever I speak in English I get nervous.

There are so many Korean employees who speak good English well around me.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Many Korean colleagues of mine speak English very well.

That makes me always get nervous.
>> That always makes me feel nervous.

That\'s the one of the reason I take this class to improve my English ability.
>> That is one of the reasons I am taking this class, to improve my English ability.

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