Please don't come Friday!! ㅠㅠ
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow it's so sad because I nearly completed the composition but because I didn't save it and my ID had been log out, the whole composition was gone.kkkk
But now I'm writing it again because I'm an exemplary student.:)!!kkk
I think importance of budgeting varies from person to person.
Sometimes I call myself Scrooge.
And you might be able to guess how I think about budgeting.
I think making a budget is quite important.kkk
There are many advantages of making a budget.
For example, as you try to fit into your budget, you could prevent over-consuming and know income and expense of your money accurately.
Also, there might be times that you need some money immediately.
But even if that happens, you could spend your money without borrowing from others.
And you could also be able to guess which character I like most of Disney's characters.
Yes! Donald Duck is my favorite character in Disney!! kkk
Again I feel soooo sad it's Friday. Bye:) ㅠㅠ
강사 첨삭
To the sweetest, YOU!!!!
I appreciate it so much that you\'re letting me know personal things about you.
I can\'t help but to feel sad reading your composition. I am sad in a positive way!
You are indeed an exemplary student because you never complain and you comply
with everything well. :) I love your optimism very much so I am enjoying talking with you
and even reading notes from you.
Anyway, please check the corrections I made here!
Have a happy weekend my dear!
T.Kristel-
Wow it\'s so sad because I nearly completed the composition but because I didn\'t save it and my ID had been log out, the whole composition was gone.kkkk
>> Wow it\'s so sad because I nearly completed the composition but because I didn\'t save it and my ID had been logged out, the whole composition was gone.kkkkBut now I\'m writing it again because I\'m an exemplary student.:)!!kkk
>> CORRECT!!!I think importance of budgeting varies from person to person.
>> I think the importance of budgeting varies from person to person. Sometimes I call myself Scrooge.
>> CORRECT!!!And you might be able to guess how I think about budgeting.
>> CORRECT!!!I think making a budget is quite important.kkk
>> CORRECT!!!There are many advantages of making a budget.
>> CORRECT!!!For example, as you try to fit into your budget, you could prevent over-consuming and know income and expense of your money accurately.
>> CORRECT!!!Also, there might be times that you need some money immediately.
>> CORRECT!!!
>> Also, there might be times that you need some money urgently.
>> Also, there might be times that you need some money for emergency purposes.But even if that happens, you could spend your money without borrowing from others.
>> And you could also be able to guess which character I like most of Disney\'s characters.
>> And you could also be able to guess which character I like the most of the Disney\'s characters.Yes! Donald Duck is my favorite character in Disney!! kkk
>> CORRECT!!!Again I feel soooo sad it\'s Friday. Bye:) ㅠㅠ
>> CORRECT!!!
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