Please elaborate this saying by Lucille Ball “In life, all good things come hard, but wisdom is the
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human always try to find truth during whole past history
that motivation is i think we have natural willing to make better us than before
it\'s not forced or ordered, i think just our instinct.
so we can achieve good things which exist in our life
but of course, when we get it something pay for cost that you have to do
even if you don\'t want, that is a rule.
And if i want to good things might much harder than you want to normal.
above all, it\'s hardest which have to experience to get something
I mentioned important of time before. it has same algorithm.
we know about somethings though, we can\'t do it
To get wisdom have to suffer from a lot of fail
you should see like a bird eye view what you do
To look down on everything. this is another level
also wisdom have to be with warm heart.
if it doesn\'t, wisdom lose itself value
abundant experience and warm heart, that Two things is truly wisdom
so how dare can we get wisdom?
we can\'t
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Interesting points today, [이름] [이름].
You\'re very expressive on this piece today.
Keep it up!
~Teacher Eve.
human always try to find truth during whole past history
>> Humans always try to find the truth even during our past history.
that motivation is i think we have natural willing to make better us than before
>> That motivation is what I think is making us naturally willing to be better than before.
it\'s not forced or ordered, i think just our instinct.
>> It\'s not forced or ordered, I think it\'s just our instincts.
so we can achieve good things which exist in our life
>> So we can achieve good things to exist in our life.
but of course, when we get it something pay for cost that you have to do
>> But of course, when we get it, there\'s always a price to pay.
even if you don\'t want, that is a rule.
>> Correct!
And if i want to good things might much harder than you want to normal.
>> And if I want to achieve good things, I have to exert more effort than normal.
above all, it\'s hardest which have to experience to get something
>> Above all, it\'s the hardest to get something from experiences.
I mentioned important of time before. it has same algorithm.
>> I mentioned the importance of time before, it has the same algorithm.
we know about somethings though, we can\'t do it
>> Though we know about somethings, we can\'t do it.
To get wisdom have to suffer from a lot of fail
>> To get wisdome we have to suffer from a lot of failures.
you should see like a bird eye view what you do
>> You should look with a bird\'s eye view on what to do.
To look down on everything. this is another level
>> To look down on everything, this is another level.
also wisdom have to be with warm heart.
>> Also wisdome comes with a warm heart.
if it doesn\'t, wisdom lose itself value
>> If it doesn\'t
abundant experience and warm heart, that Two things is truly wisdom
>> An abundant experience and a warm heart are two of the things that makes up true wisdom.
so how dare can we get wisdom?
>> So how can we get wisdom?
we can\'t
>> We can\'t.
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