Please give a contrast between the life in the rural area and life in the big city. Give details.

Living in the big city was my dream when I was young, and living in the country side is my dream now. There are a lot of differences between living in the rural area and city. The best thing would be the access convenience if we are living in the big city. People can send their children to the school by walk and see the movie or musical drama frequently and use variety facilities which small cities don't have. It is nearly impossible to see the musical drama which famous actors appear without booking accommodation, if they are living the rural area. Because the big scale performance usually be held in the big city due to the populations. However, there are disadvantages living in the city that are living under the bad air. It is really crowded wherever people visit. Koreans called the subway as "hell subway". That's why I would like to live in a rural area these days. I would like to breath fresh air, have quite life and I don't want to live under the pressure from many causes.

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Please give a contrast between the life in the rural area and life in the big city. Give details.

Living in the big city was my dream when I was young, and living in the country side is my dream now.

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or>>Settling in the big city was my ultimate goal when I was in my youth, but now, my aim is to spend the rest of my days in the countryside.

There are a lot of differences between living in the rural area and the city.

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or>>There is a huge gap between living in a rural area and living in the big city.

The best thing would be the access convenience if we are living in the big city.

>>The best thing would be the access to a lot of convenient things, if we are living in the big city.

or>>The best thing would be the convenience, if we are living in the big city.

People can send their children to the school by walk and see the movie or musical drama frequently and use variety facilities which small cities don\'t have.

>>People can send their children to school on foot, watch movies or musical plays frequently, and use a variety of facilities, which small cities don\'t have.

It is nearly impossible to see the musical drama which famous actors appear without booking accommodation, if they are living the rural area.

>>It is nearly impossible to see a musical play, which famous actors appear in without booking an accommodation, if they are living the rural area.

Because the big scale performance usually be held in the big city due to the populations.

>>Because, large-scale performances are usually held in the big city due to the population.

However, there are disadvantages living in the city that are living under the bad air.

>>However, there are disadvantages in living in the city, which is, living under an air-polluted atmosphere.

It is really crowded wherever people visit.

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or>>It is really crowded everywhere.

or>>Wherever people go, it is always crowded.

Koreans called the subway as \"hell subway\".

>>Koreans call the subway as \"hell subway\".

or>>Koreans have termed the subway rides as “hell subway”.

or>>Koreans have coined a phrase referring to the subway, it is “hell subway”.

That\'s why I would like to live in a rural area these days.

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or>>This is the big reason why I’m hoping to live in a rural area these days.

I would like to breath fresh air, have quite life and I don\'t want to live under the pressure from many causes. 

>>I would like to breath some fresh air, have a quite life and I don\'t want to live under pressure from all kinds of things.