PLEASE GIVE A CORRECT RESPONSE ON HOW TO ASK FOR HELP OR DECLINE A REQUEST

2022-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

1. You lost your phone. - Can you help to find my phone? 2. Somebody is asking to borrow 100 dollars from you. - Sorry, I don\'t have money. Because I don\'t earn any money. Although I have money, I don\'t lend to strangers. 3. An elderly woman asks you to help her carry a heavy box but you cannot also carry it by yourself. - Sorry, I don\'t carry it. I am very weak. You will ask other people instead of me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Jay!
Good morning! I appreciate you for spending time writing your homework. Please check on the minimal corrections that I did on your sentences and practice them for your improvement. thank you :)
see you later
T. Aki~
1. You lost your phone. - Can you help to find my phone?
>>> Can you help me find my phone?
2. Somebody is asking to borrow 100 dollars from you.
- Sorry, I don\'t have money. Because I don\'t earn any money. Although I have money, I don\'t lend to strangers.
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> Sorry I don\'t have money because I am not working yet. Even though I have money, I will not lend it to strangers.
3. An elderly woman asks you to help her carry a heavy box but you cannot also carry it by yourself.
- Sorry, I don\'t carry it. I am very weak. You will ask other people instead of me.
>>>  Sorry I can\'t carry it, I am very weak. Maybe you can ask other people instead of me.

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