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-One day, I watched on TV that raising a dog is good for emotional stability. So, I decided that my sister can raise a dog and cure her mental disease.
-I bought a puppy and I gave puppy for her. It's breed is Maltease and we named it Mi-so. I think it is the nicest thing I've ever done for someday. After that, she got mentally sound and the dog allergies didn't occur. Mi-so always make my family smile.
Sorry,,,,
I have to correct this sentence tonight.
Please, hurry up.
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Hi there!
Here are my corrections for you:
-One day, I watched on TV that raising a dog is good for emotional stability. So, I decided that my sister can raise a dog and cure her mental disease.>> One day, I watched on TV that raising a pet dog is good for emotional stability. So, I decided that my sister can raise a dog and cure her mental disease.-I bought a puppy and I gave puppy for her. It's breed is Maltease and we named it Mi-so. I think it is the nicest thing I've ever done for someday. After that, she got mentally sound and the dog allergies didn't occur. Mi-so always make my family smile.>> -I bought a puppy and I gave it to her. Its breed is Maltese and we named it Mi-so. I think it is the nicest thing I've ever done for someone. After that, she was mentally sound and the dog allergies didn't occur. Mi-so always make my family smile.
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