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If you find the strange expression, please proofread it by using more uncommon expression.
>> If you find any strange expression, please proofread it by using a more common expression.

>> OR YOU MEAN TO SAY: If you find any usual expression, proofread it by using more uncommon vocabularies or expressions.
The title is my family\'s responsibilities for household works.

>> Correct
>> OR: The title is \"My family\'s household responsibilities.\"
There are so many thing to do in my house.

>> There are so many things to do in our house.

 My father was a conservative type of person as much as his view of a Household work is that even children have to help household chores.

>> My father is a conservative man and as for him, the children need to help with the household chores.

So, when I was young, I used to get punished for not doing house chores.

>> So when I was young, I used to receive punishments for not helping out around the house.

Although My Mother is not a housewife. she does most of the work in the house.

>> Although my mother is a career woman, she is still the one most responsible in doing the household chores.

Her main responsibility is cooking meals.

>> Her main responsibility is to cook meals for us.

>> OR: Her main task in our house is to cook meals for us.

I feel she is a great cook.

>> I think that she is a great cook.

She also washes the dishes and does the laundry.

>> Correct

My father helps by watering the plants, dusting the livingroom and vacuuming the floors.

>> My father helps by watering the plants, dusting the living room and vacuuming the floors.

My sister usually sets the table and clears the table.
>> My sister usually sets the table and also clears the table after meals.

As the man of the house, I do phsically demanding chores like recycling, throwing out garbage, moving the thing around.

>> As one of the men in our house, I do the most physically demanding chores, like recycling, throwing out the garbage and moving the things around.

Apart from these work, when my mother go working, I sometimes help her household works with my sister

>> Apart from doing all of these, my sister and I usually take over the responsibilities of my mother whenever she goes to work.