please read it and edit.

2011-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Good afternoon Tiny! I want you to edit it. Thank you very much! See you than. [Could you check the stock of the items in advanced before we placed order ? We need your definite confirmation because we are difficult to cancellation once we take an order from customer.]

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Good morning [이름]! Thank you for your article. Kindly check the minor corrections that I made. Have a wonderful day!   Good afternoon Tiny! >>Correct. I want you to edit it. >>Correct! Thank you very much! >> Correct! See you than. >> See you then. [Could you check the stock of the items in advanced before we placed order ? >> Could you check the stock of the items in advance before we place our orders? We need your definite confirmation because we are difficult to cancellation once we take an order from customer. >> We need your definite confirmation because it is difficult to cancel once we take an order from the customer.  

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