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1.Lee Munse's song was transcribed by Bigbang. 2.I hope to become to have deep pockets in the near future. 3.That group is a coalition of the Pharmaceutical and Medical association for An Chulsu camp. 4.I crashed as soon as I came back home. 5.I made a lot of mistakes continuously since lack of sleep. I guess I slept for about 6 hours in 2 days. 6.I got better than yesterday. 7.I have taken the piano lesson when I was in elementary. 8.I have taken the guitar lesson for a short period. So it didn't affect me. 9.My grandmother bought the piano to me. She liked it when I played the piano. 10.I usually go to the hiphop music concert. 11.She decided to marry him despite the objection of her parents. 12.An Chulsu syndrome is a clear manifestation that people are having a lot of discontent about Korean politics. 13.You should earn your stripes regarding English if you want to enter our company. 14.Now it's a period of sale. 15.I read a book. The title is "1984" written by George Orwell. 16.I'm afraid to go out today. I heard that it will become colder from today. 17.I said to my boss that I wouldn't work at this pharmacy unless I was extremely poor. 18.I will leave here unless you come here within 10 minutes. 19.I couldn't be on time for my appointment. So I tried to set my alarm every 10 minutes from 1 hour before the appointed time. But it was no use. 20.I drink a lot of water about 2 liters everyday. 21.She was petrified all though watching the horror movie. 22.I was aghast at his monster costume. 23.I was alarmed at that I'll stay alone at home for 3 days. 24.People were awestruck by the pictures of Everest. 25.I was startled at a bird's rush. 26.I'm still suffering from fatigue since a Halloween party. 27.I went to the skin clinic and had a facial massage. 28.I talked over the phone more than hour with my mom. 29.I'm excited because I'm gonna do a blind date on this Saturday. 30.Who does arrange a blind date to you? My friend in university is supposed to arrange a blind date to me. 31.I call my mom almost everyday. 32.I'm an unpopular blood type B female. 33.The blood type B people are believed to be hot-tempered and have a sharp tongue. 34.Some parts match my character. But it is the personality that the other blood type people may also have. 35.The deadpan expression of that comedian makes more funny. 36.Hyelim filled Sunmi's shoes in a member of Wondergirls. 37.Give me some candies quickly before shouting "trick or treat". 38.I went around the street of Itaewon holding a thing like a witch's cauldron. 39.I stretched for 20 minutes before sleeping. I decided to stretch for 20 minutes everyday to strengthen my back. 40.I don't know why suddenly the number of patients decreased. I just guess it's due to the freezing weather. 41.It's only now that I feel relieved. I have had a difficult time all though this past week due to Halloween party. At last it's the last working day. 42.Are you planning to do anything this weekend? Our group made of doctors and pharmacist in our church is going on a trip to Yangpyung this weekend. 44.Is there another plan? I'm going to a reading club for the third time. We'r gonna discuss a book "1984" written by George Orwell.45.How can the personality be devided for 4 types. There is no way. 46.I have been disadvantaged due to my appearance. I look sharp and wicked. So most of people think that I'm a cold person when they meet with me at first. But I'm not. I'm very warm and friendly although it may be just in my thought. 47.We will play the game. There are so many game to do whenever people drink a liquor. 48.Both are very kind to me. 49.I hate the fack that my face will become wizened. 50.I were hot under the collar after hearing him talk. 51.Both hard work and luck are necessary to succeed. There are some people who did their best but didn't succeed. And people cannot succeed only with luck, because luck cannot act them forever. 52.He drove me to the Yangpyung where our church group went on an outing. 53.I'm thinking to meet him one more time. 54.We should throw away that streotype about gender. 55.That is a general trait of Korean people.

Hello Ms. [이름]. This is a very long composition. I hope you could send it in earlier next time so that I have more time to check it. Thank you for your consideration. Have a good night. ~Teacher Marie~ 1.Lee Munse\'s song was transcribed by Bigbang. >> Lee Munse\'s song was remaked by Bigbang.2.I hope to become someone who has deep pockets in the near future. >> CORRECT3.That group is a coalition of the Pharmaceutical and Medical association for the An Chulsu camp. >> CORRECT4.I crashed on the bed as soon as I came back home. >> CORRECT5.I made a lot of mistakes continuously due to lack of sleep. I guess I slept for about 6 hours in 2 days. >> CORRECT6.I got better than yesterday. >> I feel better than yesterday.7.I have taken piano lessons when I was in elementary. >> CORRECT8.I have taken guitar lessons for a short period only. >> CORRECT So it didn\'t affect me. >> So I didn\'t learn that much.9. My grandmother bought me a piano. She liked it when I played the piano. >> CORRECT10.I usually go to hiphop concerts. >> CORRECT11.She decided to marry him despite the objection of her parents. >> CORRECT12.An Chulsu syndrome is a clear manifestation that people are having a lot of discontent about Korean politics. >> CORRECT13.You should earn your stripes in English if you want to enter our company. >> CORRECT14.Now it\'s a period of sale. >> It\'s the sale period now.15.I read a book. >> CORRECT The title is \"1984\" written by George Orwell. >> The title is \"1984\" and it was written by George Orwell.16.I\'m afraid to go out today. I heard that it will be colder starting today. >> CORRECT17.I said to my boss that I wouldn\'t work at this pharmacy unless I was extremely poor. >> CORRECT18.I will leave here unless you come here within 10 minutes.>> I will leave if you don\'t come here within 10 minutes. OR >> I won\'t stay here unless you come within the next 10 minutes. 19.I couldn\'t be on time for my appointment. >> CORRECT So I tried to set my alarm every 10 minutes from 1 hour before the appointed time. >> CORRECT But it was no use. >> But it was useless.20.I drink a lot of water; about 2 liters everyday. >> CORRECT21.She was petrified while watching the horror movie.>> CORRECT 22.I was aghast at his monster costume. >> CORRECT23.I was alarmed at the fact that I\'ll stay alone at home for 3 days. >> CORRECT24.People were awestruck by the pictures of Everest.>> CORRECT 25.I was startled at a bird\'s rush.>> CORRECT 26.I\'m still suffering from fatigue since the Halloween party.>> CORRECT 27.I went to the skin clinic and had a facial massage.>> CORRECT 28.I talked over the phone for more than hour with my mom. >> CORRECT29.I\'m excited because I\'m gonna do a blind date this Saturday. >> CORRECT30.Who does arrange a blind date to you? >> Who arranged the blind date for you? My friend in university is supposed to arrange a blind date to me. >> My university friend was supposed to arrange a blind date for me.31.I call my mom almost everyday. >> CORRECT 32.I\'m an unpopular blood type B female.>> CORRECT 33.The blood type B people are believed to be hot-tempered and have a sharp tongue.>> CORRECT 34.Some parts match my character. But it is the personality that the other blood type people may also have.>> CORRECT 35.The deadpan expression of that comedian makes it funnier. >> CORRECT36. Hyelim filled in Sunmi\'s shoes as a member of the  Wonder Girls.>> CORRECT 37.Give me some candies quickly after I shout \"trick or treat\". >> CORRECT38.I went around the street of Itaewon holding a thing like a witch\'s cauldron. >> CORRECT39.I stretched for 20 minutes before sleeping. I decided to stretch for 20 minutes everyday to strengthen my back. >> CORRECT40.I don\'t know why suddenly the number of patients decreased. I guess it\'s due to the freezing weather. >> CORRECT41.It\'s only now that I feel relieved. >> CORRECT I have had a difficult time all throughout this past week due to the Halloween party. >> CORRECT At last it\'s the last working day. >> Finally it\'s the last working day.42.Are you planning to do anything this weekend? >> CORRECT Our group made of doctors and pharmacist in our church is going on a trip to Yangpyung this weekend. >> CORRECT44.Is there another plan? I\'m going to a reading club for the third time. We\'re gonna discuss a book \"1984\" written by George Orwell.45. How can the personality be divided in 4 types? There is no way. >> CORRECT46.I have been disadvantaged due to my appearance. I look sharp and wicked. >> CORRECT So most people think that I\'m a cold person when they first meet me. But I\'m not. >> CORRECT I\'m very warm and friendly although it may be just in my thought. >> I think I\'m very warm and friendly.47.We will play some games. There are so many games to play whenever people drink liquor. >> CORRECT48.Both are very kind to me. >> They are both very kind to me.49.I hate the fack that my face will become wizened. >> I hate the fact that my face will be wizened someday.50.I were hot under the collar after hearing him talk. >> I was hot under the collar after hearing him talk.51.Both hard work and luck are necessary to succeed. There are some people who did their best but didn\'t succeed. And people cannot succeed only with luck, because luck isn\'t there forever. >> CORRECT52.He drove me to the Yangpyung where our church group went on an outing. >> CORRECT53.I\'m thinking of meeting him again one more time. >> CORRECT54.We should throw away that stereotype about gender. >> CORRECT55.That is a general trait of Korean people. >> CORRECT