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If i can choose a store which can shop for free, I will choose electronics store.

>> If I can choose a store where I can shop for free, I will choose an electronics store.

Because recently I need a new desktop and want to buy a iphone new series that iphone 9.

>> This is because I need a new desktop recently and I want to buy the new iPhone 9, too.

And the elctronis are ususally expensive than another one.

>> Also, electronics are usually more expensive than other commodities.

so I think It is more beneficial to buy in electronics store than another store!:)

>> Therefore, I think it is more beneficial to buy in an electronics store than in any other shops. :)
My desktop is too slow to search internet.

>> My desktop is too slow to search the internet.

At first, I thought the reason why my desktop is late is due to wi-fi. But when I use other one, It is still slow.

>> At first, I thought the reason why my desktop is loading slow is due to the Wi-Fi connection, but when I used other one, it is still slow.
If there is no restrition to buy in the store, I will buy all of things that i have wanted such as television more than 60 inches, airpods pro and styler that made by LG.

>> If there is no restriction to what I can buy in the store, I will purchase all of the things that I have wanted such as a television more than 60 inches, airpods pro and styler made by LG.