Please share your thoughts: Are friends more important than family? What do you think?
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I don\'t agree with that. friends are important but not more than family.
friends can [이름]nge depending on the situation but, my family always by my side. and I was also given many things from my Parents. they support my dream. and they really wish my success.
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I don\'t agree with that.
>> CORRECT
friends are important but not more than family.
>> CORRECT
friends can [이름]nge depending on the situation but, my family always by my side.
>> Friends can [이름]nge depending on the situation but my family will always be by my side.
and I was also given many things from my Parents.
>> Also, I was given many things by my parents.
OR>> My parents also gave me a lot of things.
they support my dream. and they really wish my success.
>> They support my dream and they really wish for my success.
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