Please take note of specific English skills you want to enhance this year.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to enhance my English skill this year. I especially want to develop my speaking skill. But it\'s hard to get a chance to conversate with people in my circumstances. I usually stay at home with my daughter. My daughter doesn\'t go to school yet. She always wants to stay with me. Also, She is nervous and scared about English. When people talk to her, she cries. I have to help her to learn English. So, these days I bring her to the library which has some programs that read books for children. There are not many children. For the first time, she cried a lot. We couldn\'t join there. But the second time, she was interested a little bit in her classmate. I\'m learning this culture and atmosphere with her. This process isn\'t easy for me, because sometimes I also don\'t understand what her teacher says to us. Also, while I taking care of my daughter, I have a lot to go over every moment. But I won\'t give up studying English and keep studying English with her.
강사 첨삭
I love how you bravely take a step forward to enhance your English skills together with your daughter. That is interesting!
-Faith-
I want to enhance my English skill this year. >> I want to enhance my English skills this year.
I especially want to develop my speaking skill.
>> I especially want to develop my speaking skills.
But it\'s hard to get a chance to conversate with people in my circumstances.
>> However, it is hard to get a chance to conversate with people in my circumstances.
I usually stay at home with my daughter.
>> CORRECT
My daughter doesn\'t go to school yet.
>> CORRECT
OR My daughter does not go to school yet.
She always wants to stay with me.
>> CORRECT
OR At her age, she is really clingy.
Also, She is nervous and scared about English.
>> Also, she is nervous and scared of English.
When people talk to her, she cries.
>> CORRECT
I have to help her to learn English. So, these days I bring her to the library which has some programs that read books for children.
>> I have to help her to learn English, so these days I bring her to the library which has some programs that read books for children.
OR I have to help her to study English, so these days I bring her to the library which has some reading programs for children.
There are not many children.
>> However, there are not many children.
For the first time, she cried a lot. We couldn\'t join there.
>> For the first time, she cried a lot, hence we could not join there.
But the second time, she was interested a little bit in her classmate.
>> Fortunately, for the second time, she was interested a little bit in her classmate.
I\'m learning this culture and atmosphere with her.
>> CORRECT
OR I am learning this culture and atmosphere with her.
This process isn\'t easy for me, because sometimes I also don\'t understand what her teacher says to us.
>> This process is not easy for me because sometimes I also do not understand what her teacher say to us.
Also, while I taking care of my daughter, I have a lot to go over every moment.
>> Also, while I am taking care of my daughter, I have a lot to go over every moment.
But I won\'t give up studying English and keep studying English with her.
>> Nevertheless, I will not give up studying English and keep pursuing it with her.
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