Please tell me more about the drinking culture in Korea.

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1. Korean usually like to drink Soju or beer because they’re accessable anywhere commonly and prices are cheaper than others.

>>Koreans usually like to drink Soju or beer because they’re accessible everywhere and the prices are cheaper than others.

2. Today I want to tell you about Korean drinking manner.

>>Today, I want to tell you about how Koreans drink.
3. When you drink some alcohol with older people than you, you should turn your body to right or left then swallow a glass of alcohol. it’s considered polite manner in Korea.

>>When you drink with people older than you, you should turn your body to the right of left and then swallow a glass of alcohol. This is considered a polite gesture in Korea.
4. When you pour alcohol into the glass for older people, you should grab the bottle with both hands. It’s also considered polite.

>>When you pour alcohol for older people, you should hold the bottle with both hands. It\'s also considered polite.

5. In the past, some people(especially old males) liked to share 1 of glass, and they thought it was the way to strengthen their own amity.

>>CORRECT!
6. For example, after 1st person drinks a cup of Soju, he gives the cup to 2nd one then 2nd one drinks a cup of Soju, he also gives the cup to 3rd person.

>>For example, after the 1st person drinks a cup of Soju, he gives the cup to the 2nd one then after the 2nd one drinks a cup of Soju, he also passes the cup to the 3rd person.
7. However young generation tends not to accept this custom these days because it’s not hygienic at all and I also dislike this custom too.

>>However, the young generation tends to disregard this custom these days because it\'s not hygienic at all. I personally dislike this custom too.