Please tell me your favorite food and why do you like that food?
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Teacher ELLY.
Please tell me your favorite food and why do you like that food?
It is one of the hardest questions for me, because I think every food has its own taste and favor, and I like enjoying most of them which I have ever eaten.
>>It is one of the hardest questions for me, because I think every food has its own taste and flavor, and I like enjoying most of them, especially the ones I have ever eaten before.
However, there are some foods that I want to eat when I return to my country after a long abroad trip.
>>However, there are some foods that I want to eat when I return to my country after a long trip abroad.
They are called ‘tteokbokki’ and ‘sundea’.
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or>>These are the “tteokbokki” and “sundae”.
Tteobokki is that small pieces of the rice cake are boiled with red chili paste, sugar and other ingredients.
>>Tteobokki are the small pieces of rice cakes which are boiled with red chili paste, sugar and other ingredients.
‘Sundea’ is the roll of intestines filled in vegetables, rice and glassy noodle.
>>Sundea are intestines rolled and filled in with vegetables, rice and glassy noodles.
Even though I do not eat them often when I stay in my country, they remind me.
>>Even though, I do not eat these often when I stay in my country, you reminded me of them.
However, there is a small problem.
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or>>But, there is one tiny issue.
They are common street foods in Korea and school kids like them, so it is a little hard to eat them with my family after returning home.
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or>>These are very common Korean street foods which the school kids enjoy eating, so it is a bit tough to eat them with my family at home after school.
Then I used to eat them with my friends or just alone.
>>So then, I used to eat these alone or with my friends.
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