Please Trust me.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I am not a person who doesn\'t take my responsibility. If you give me a mission, I will complete the mission.
Second, I am a person who have quick wits. If someone doesn\'t trust me, I can detect it. After detecting that, I can\'t believe that one.
Third, These days, we have been spending hard time. We can overcome with trusting each other. So, People around me, should trust me.
강사 첨삭
First, I am not a person who doesn\'t take my responsibility.
>> First, I am not a person who doesn\'t take responsibility. (THIS IS GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT BUT IT HAS A DIFFERENT MEANING hihi)
If you give me a mission, I will complete the mission.
>> Correct.
Second, I am a person who have quick wits.
>> Second, I am a person who has quick wits.
If someone doesn\'t trust me, I can detect it.
>> Correct.
After detecting that, I can\'t believe that one.
>> After detecting that, I won\'t believe it.
Third, These days, we have been spending hard time.
>> Third, these days, we have been having a hard time.
We can overcome with trusting each other.
>> We can overcome this by trusting each other.
So, People around me, should trust me.
>> So, people around me, should trust me.
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