Please try to find top three things that can overcome your stage fright.
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The first of the top three that can overcome your stage fright is that practice. I can\'t do anything without practice. I can learn the value of performing through practice. Even though this process is very hard for me, I can find my ability and potential by myself. If I don\'t practice and prepare for small tasks that I have in my life, it is hard to get a chance to realize good and bigger tasks to grow spiritually and mentally. Hence, I try to see what I need and what I have to do my best in my life. The second way of solution is I try to not compare people with me. If I know my value myself, I can focus on things to relate to me. Comparison with people is like killing my potential and robbing my hope. I must be careful about that. The last is prayer. God knows me well. I rely on all results from the holy spirit. I don\'t need to be afraid because He always is with me. My favorite scripture is Philippians 4:13(I can do all this through him who gives me strength.) Thanks, Faith!:)
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Amen! I always believe that our hard work will always be paid off, Jane! With God, nothing is impossible according to Luke 1:27!-Faith-
The first of the top three that can overcome your stage fright is that practice. >> The first of the top three that can overcome my stage fright is that practice.
I can\'t do anything without practice.
>> CORRECT
OR I cannot do anything without practice.
I can learn the value of performing through practice.
>> CORRECT
Even though this process is very hard for me, I can find my ability and potential by myself.
>> CORRECT
OR Despite the strenuous process, I can discover my ability and potential by myself.
If I don\'t practice and prepare for small tasks that I have in my life, it is hard to get a chance to realize good and bigger tasks to grow spiritually and mentally.
>> CORRECT
Hence, I try to see what I need and what I have to do my best in my life.
>> >> CORRECT
The second way of solution is I try to not compare people with me.
>> The second solution is I try not to compare people with me.
If I know my value myself, I can focus on things to relate to me.
>> If I know my value, I can focus on things I can relate to myself.
Comparison with people is like killing my potential and robbing my hope.
>> Comparison with people is like killing my potential and robbing of my hope.
I must be careful about that.
>> CORRECT
The last is prayer.
>> The last one is prayer.
God knows me well.
>> CORRECT
I rely on all results from the holy spirit.
>> I rely on the Holy Spirit for good results.
I don\'t need to be afraid because He always is with me.
>> CORRECT
My favorite scripture is Philippians 4:13(I can do all this through him who gives me strength.)
>> My favorite scripture is Philippians 4:13 I can do all this through Him who gives me strength.
Thanks, Faith!:)
>> CORRECT
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