Please try to find top three things that can overcome your stage fright.

2023-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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The first of the top three that can overcome your stage fright is that practice. I can\'t do anything without practice. I can learn the value of performing through practice. Even though this process is very hard for me, I can find my ability and potential by myself. If I don\'t practice and prepare for small tasks that I have in my life, it is hard to get a chance to realize good and bigger tasks to grow spiritually and mentally. Hence, I try to see what I need and what I have to do my best in my life. The second way of solution is I try to not compare people with me. If I know my value myself, I can focus on things to relate to me. Comparison with people is like killing my potential and robbing my hope. I must be careful about that. The last is prayer. God knows me well. I rely on all results from the holy spirit. I don\'t need to be afraid because He always is with me. My favorite scripture is Philippians 4:13(I can do all this through him who gives me strength.) Thanks, Faith!:)

강사 첨삭

Amen! I always believe that our hard work will always be paid off, Jane! With God, nothing is impossible according to Luke 1:27!-Faith-
The first of the top three that can overcome your stage fright is that practice. 
>> The first of the top three that can overcome my stage fright is that practice. 
I can\'t do anything without practice. 
>> CORRECT
OR I cannot do anything without practice. 
I can learn the value of performing through practice. 
>> CORRECT
Even though this process is very hard for me,  I can find my ability and potential by myself. 
>> CORRECT
OR Despite the strenuous process, I can discover my ability and potential by myself. 
If I don\'t practice and prepare for small tasks that I have in my life, it is hard to get a chance to realize good and bigger tasks to grow spiritually and mentally. 
>> CORRECT
Hence, I try to see what I need and what I have to do my best in my life. 
>> >> CORRECT 
The second way of solution is I try to not compare people with me. 
>> The second solution is I try not to compare people with me. 
If I know my value myself, I can focus on things to relate to me. 
>> If I know my value, I can focus on things I can relate to myself. 
Comparison with people is like killing my potential and robbing my hope. 
>> Comparison with people is like killing my potential and robbing of my hope. 
I must be careful about that. 
>> CORRECT 
The last is prayer. 
>> The last one is prayer. 
God knows me well. 
>> CORRECT 
I rely on all results from the holy spirit. 
>> I rely on the Holy Spirit for good results. 
I don\'t need to be afraid because He always is with me. 
>> CORRECT 
My favorite scripture is Philippians 4:13(I can do all this through him who gives me strength.) 
>> My favorite scripture is Philippians 4:13 I can do all this through Him who gives me strength.
Thanks, Faith!:)
>> CORRECT 

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