Please use the following keywords in a sentence. 1. help 2. need 3. think

2018-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I have to help to collect some imformation he need for his world around journey so, I thought what is the best way to collect lots of imformation for him.

강사 첨삭

Hi Dr. [이름]!

I appreciate your opinions a lot!

Great job today, as usual!

Have a wonderful day and talk to you again tomorrow!

Teacher ELLY.

ESSAY QUESTION: Please use the following keywords in a sentence.

1. help

2. need

3. think

I have to help to collect some imformation he need for his world around journey so.

>>I have to help in collecting some information he needs for his journey around the world.

or>>I have to help him collect some information, which he needs for his tour around the world.

I thought what is the best way to collect lots of imformation for him.

>>I thought, that is the best way to collect lots of information for him.

or>>I thought, this is the best way to collect lots of information for him.

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