Please write about the things that you love doing aside from taking naps.
학생이 쓴 원문
I love drinking coffee. These days I drink coffee not to take a nap. Of course, If I take a nap, I can\'t sleep well at night. Also, If I drink a cup of coffee, I can\'t sleep well at night. I have chosen drinking coffee. I drink two cup of coffee a day. Because If I drink coffee more, I can\'t sleep well, and I get heartburn. I should control a mount of coffee everyday. It\'s a way to enjoy coffee for a long time.
강사 첨삭
I love drinking coffee.
>> Correct.
These days I drink coffee not to take a nap.
>> Correct.
Of course, If I take a nap, I can\'t sleep well at night.
>> Of course, if I take a nap, I can\'t sleep well at night.
Also, If I drink a cup of coffee, I can\'t sleep well at night.
>> Also, if I drink a cup of coffee, I can\'t sleep well at night.
I have chosen drinking coffee. I drink two cup of coffee a day.
>> I have chosen to drink coffee. I drink two cups of coffee a day.
Because If I drink coffee more, I can\'t sleep well, and I get heartburn.
>> It is because if I drink coffee more, I can\'t sleep well, and I get heartburn.
I should control a mount of coffee everyday.
>> I should control the amount of coffee that I drink every day.
It\'s a way to enjoy coffee for a long time.
>> It\'s a way to enjoy it for a long time.
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