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2019-03-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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it was good to se after a long time. i'm always impressed with your class. and are always forces.♥ Is there anything else you need? i want to buy a big backpack. because i will go on a trip alone after finishing Malaysia internship. what did you do thesedays? i've been busy for a while. i took a parttime job. i work foruniversity student to introduce a foreign language program. this work was short but i think i'll be a valuable experience for me. it was the first time to speech for 15minutes. especially in the situation where everyone is focued and looking at me. At first, i was shaking, but when it's the second time was even better and looks cinfident. it's good experiences. HOMEWORK: 1. In the (forward) the author states his intentions in writing the book. 2. The museum curator discovered that the Persian vase was a (forgery). 3. It looks like he has (forgotten) our appointment. 4. She is so (forgetful/forgettable). that she has to make a note of everything.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]
Everyday is a challenge. We need to live with the challenges of life and in order for us to get through with it. We must learn our lessons first. then you will see yourself a better and mature person.
T.Jeny

it was good to se after a long time.
>>It was good to see you after a long time.
i\'m always impressed with your class. and are always forces.♥
>>I am always impressed with our class, you always focus.
Is there anything else you need?
>>correct
i want to buy a big backpack. because i will go on a trip alone after finishing Malaysia internship.
>>I want to buy a big backpack because I will go on a trip alone after I finish my internship in Malaysia.
what did you do thesedays?
>>What are you doing these days?
i\'ve been busy for a while. i took a parttime job.
>> I\'ve been busy for a while and I took a part-time job.
i work foruniversity student to introduce a foreign language program.
>>I worked for the university student in introducing them about the foreign language program.
this work was short but i think i\'ll be a valuable experience for me.
>>It was just for a short time but I think it will be a valuable experience for me.
it was the first time to speech for 15minutes. especially in the situation where everyone is focued and looking at me.
>>It was my first time to make a speech for 15minutes especially in a situation where everyone was focused and they were all looking at me.
At first, i was shaking, but when it\'s the second time was even better and looks cinfident.
>>At first I was shaking but when I tried it for the second time I was more confident.
it\'s good experiences.
>>It was a good experience.

HOMEWORK:
1. In the (forward) the author states his intentions in writing the book.
>>In the foreword, the author states his intentions in writing the book.
2. The museum curator discovered that the Persian vase was a (forgery).
>>correct
3. It looks like he has (forgotten) our appointment.
>>correct
4. She is so (forgetful/forgettable). that she has to make a note of everything.
>>correct

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