plot and ending
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I think the plot is important. If the ending is all that matters, people are more likely to get tired in the middle or turn off the movie. People\'s patience is unexpectedly bad.
강사 첨삭
I think the plot is important.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I believe the plot is essential.
If the ending is all that matters, people are more likely to get tired in the middle or turn off the movie.
>> If only the ending matters, people are more likely to get bored in the middle or turn off the movie.
OR >> If a movie focuses only on the ending, viewers are likely to lose interest midway and stop watching.
People\'s patience is unexpectedly bad.
>> People’s patience is shorter than we expect.
OR >> After all, people tend to have limited patience.
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