Pls cancel today's class

2011-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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Hi Dominic, I'm sorry that I could not answer your call last night. I was so tired that I went to the bed early. I'm afraid to say that I have to cancel today's class because I am going to have dinner with my parents-in-law and go to a movie with them. See you on monday and happy new year! Thank you. Bye~

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Hello Ms. [Name], Thank you for informing me in adanve about your plans for tonight. With regards to your schedule please just put the class on hold, coz if you won\'t I think you know the drill-I have still have to call you. J I hope you have a good time tonight! Enjoy yourself and of course, Happy New Year! -T. Dominic-   Hi Dominic,>>CORRECTI\'m sorry that I could not answer your call last night. >>CORRECT >> I\'m sorry that I wasn\'t able to take your call last night. I was so tired that I went to the bed early. >> I was so tired so I went to the bed early. I\'m afraid to say that I have to cancel today\'s class because I am going to have dinner with my parents-in-law and go to a movie with them. >> I\'m afraid that I have to cancel today\'s class because I am going to have dinner with my parents-in-law and watch a movie with them.See you on monday and happy new year! >> See you on monday and Happy New Year!Thank you. >>CORRECTBye ~ >>Bye.

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