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Dear [Name], Hi, Thank you for your letter and painting. I really like your painting, I think you are good at painting. I am [이름] live in Seoul, Korea. When I saw your picture at first, I was really surprised that you're so pretty, and I was so happy that you live in Laos. I've been to Laos. It was already three years ago, but I remember the beautiful scenery, peaceful cities, kind and warm hearted people so vividly as if yesterday. I was very impressed, so Laos became one of my favorite contries. I would like to visit your country again, especially your city, if I have a chance. You said that you want to be a doctor, a doctor is a job that I respect the most. I am sure you will be a great doctor who gives hope to many sick and poor people. I would like to support you until you can accomplish your goals. I'll always pray for your health and happy life. I'll wirte you again. Good bye and best regards, [이름] PS,I am attaching my pictures with my husband in Laos.

You really are a good person!!! I am sure Phair, will be very happy to hear this from your. I am sorry if it\'s only now that I sent my corrections. I let\'s talk about Phair in our class later. See you! T.Sheela Dear [Name], >>Correct!Hi, >>Hi!Thank you for your letter and painting. I really like your painting, I think you are good at painting. >>Thank you for your letter and painting. I really like your painting, I think you are a good painter. >>OR: Thank you for your letter and painting. I really like it and I think you are a good painter.I am [이름] live in Seoul, Korea. >> I live in [이름], Seoul, Korea.When I saw your picture at first, I was really surprised that you\'re so pretty, and I was so happy that you live in Laos. >> When I first saw your picture, I was really surprised since you are so pretty, I am so happy to know that you are living in Laos.I\'ve been to Laos. It was already three years ago, but I remember the beautiful scenery, peaceful cities, kind and warm hearted people so vividly as if yesterday. >>I\'ve been to Laos. It was already three years ago, but I can remember the beautiful scenery, peaceful cities, and kind and warm hearted people so vividly, as if it was just yesterday.I was very impressed, so Laos became one of my favorite contries. >> Correct!I would like to visit your country again, especially your city, if I have a chance. >> If I have a chance, I would like to visit your country again especially your city.You said that you want to be a doctor, a doctor is a job that I respect the most. I am sure you will be a great doctor who gives hope to many sick and poor people. >> Correct!I would like to support you until you can accomplish your goals. >>Correct!I\'ll always pray for your health and happy life. >>Correct!I\'ll wirte you again. >>I\'ll write you again.Good bye and best regards, >>Correct![이름] >>Correct! >>OR: Sincerely yours,             [이름]PS,I am attaching my pictures with my husband in Laos. >>P.S. I am attaching my pictures with my husband in Laos.