plum
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Teacher , Jane
We made plums extract 3 months ago.
It washed plums of 10kg and drain the water and put of suger 10kg so, wait for 3months after sealimg .
The extract is stored in a bottle plum grains.
It removed the seeds from the plum kernels.
plums made side dish it`s add chilli paste and seasoning.
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Hello there,
Time is really very fast these days. We just have to take it easy and do things in the right path.
Growing and developing yourself, it could be as simple as learning one new thing a day, so take one step at a time.
T. Jeny
>>Teacher Jeny,
We made plums extract 3 months ago.
We made plums extract 3 months ago.
>>correct
It washed plums of 10kg and drain the water and put of suger 10kg so, wait for 3months after sealimg .
It washed plums of 10kg and drain the water and put of suger 10kg so, wait for 3months after sealimg .
>>I washed 10klgs. of plums, drained the water, put 10kgs. of sugar and wait for 3 months after sealing.
The extract is stored in a bottle plum grains.
The extract is stored in a bottle plum grains.
>>The extract is stored in a bottle of plum grains.
It removed the seeds from the plum kernels.
It removed the seeds from the plum kernels.
>>correct
plums made side dish it`s add chilli paste and seasoning.
plums made side dish it`s add chilli paste and seasoning.
>>The plums can be a side dish, just add chilli paste and seasonings.
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