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If you have a time machine, where do you want to go first, to your past or future life? I would be eager to back to the time when I was in high school if I would’ve a time machine. I’d grew up and lived in my hometown by the age I turned 20. My home town is in the countryside that is quite and peaceful all times. So that environment made my personality calm , easy-going and laid-back. That can also mean I am lazy in a negative way. I did not have any passion and enthusiasm to study as hard as I could. it seemed to plane and dull whenver i look back my life in high school. overall, i would be focused on studying and making plans in order not to waste preciouse time figuring out what i should do in the future.

Hello [이름]^^ Thanks for doing your homework. I agree with you in this composition, if only we have a time machine then we can go back to the times that we were happy. If we have that and we are feeling lonely today we can use that to escape reality. Isn\'t that great? For me if I have a time machine I will go back to the days I had a lot of money then bring that money in the present. kikikkiki^^. Kidding a side, though we can\'t go back to our past all we have to do is to learn from the mistakes we had in the past and use that as our inspiration for today so that we will have a good or brighter tomorrow. Keep that in mind my dear. See you later. Teacher Liza   If you have a time machine, where do you want to go first, to your past or future life?I would be eager to back to the time when I was in high school if I would’ve a time machine. >>I would be eager to go back to the time when I was in high school, if I would have a time machine. >>OR: If I would have a time machine, I would be eager to go back to the time when I was in high school.I’d grew up and lived in my hometown by the age I turned 20. >>CorrectMy home town is in the countryside that is quite and peaceful all times. >>My hometown is in the countryside and it is quiet and peaceful there at all times.So that environment made my personality calm , easy-going and laid-back. >>I adopt the environment there and it made me devoloped my own personality of becoming calm, easy-going and laid-back.That can also mean I am lazy in a negative way. >>That can also mean that I am lazy in a negative way. (hahaha nope I don\'t think so you are..) I did not have any passion and enthusiasm to study as hard as I could. >>Correct it seemed to plane and dull whenver i look back my life in high school. >>It seemed to be plain and dull whenever I look back my life in high school. overall, i would be focused on studying and making plans in order not to waste preciouse time figuring out what i should do in the future. >>Overall, I would  focus more on studying and making plans in order not to waste my precious time figuring out what should I do in the future.