plz check the short sentence.
학생이 쓴 원문
could you let me know when the 2nd shipment schedule is fixed? Then I’ll be able to negotiate with buyer for order schedule in advance.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name].
Here are the corrections you have asked.
See you tomorrow! You take care and enjoy the rest of the day! ^^
Always,
Kathrine ^^
could you let me know when the 2nd shipment schedule is fixed?
>> Let me know when the 2nd shipment schedule is fixed.
>> Please inform me about the fixed schedule of the 2nd shipment.
Then I’ll be able to negotiate with buyer for order schedule in advance.
>> Then I would be able to negotiate with the buyer to schedule the order in advance.
Here are the corrections you have asked.
See you tomorrow! You take care and enjoy the rest of the day! ^^
Always,
Kathrine ^^
could you let me know when the 2nd shipment schedule is fixed?
>> Let me know when the 2nd shipment schedule is fixed.
>> Please inform me about the fixed schedule of the 2nd shipment.
Then I’ll be able to negotiate with buyer for order schedule in advance.
>> Then I would be able to negotiate with the buyer to schedule the order in advance.
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