Poem

2011-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

학생이 쓴 원문

Dominic, Do you know the poem? I think it makes you laugh. If you are a bird, be an early bird. And catch the worm in your breakfast plate. If you are a bird, be an early bird. But if you are a worm, sleep late. This poem is so fun but great. I read this in the text book of the thrid grade in middle school. Why didn't we think the side of the worm? Until now, we only think if I were a bird. Most people think only early bird type person is desirable. Until now, maybe I've gotten others wrong with my personal judgement. But we should understand the late worm type person. It means we undestand different type of people from us. Flexible thought, creative mind..these things we should keep in mind.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]! The poem is really simple but the message is really broad. And I agree with you about having a flexible and creative mind and not tend to judge other people. ^^ Take care and talk to you [이름]n then. T. Dominic   Dominic, Do you know the poem? >> Dominic, do you know this poem?I think it makes you laugh.>> I think this will make you laugh.If you are a bird, be an early bird. >> CorrectAnd catch the worm in your breakfast plate. >> CorrectIf you are a bird, be an early bird.>> CorrectBut if you are a worm, sleep late.>> CorrectThis poem is so fun but great. >> Correct I read this in the text book of the thrid grade in middle school.>> I read this from a text book of a third grader in middle school.Why didn't we think the side of the worm? >> CorrectUntil now, we only think if I were a bird. >> Correct >>Until now we only think of "If I were a bird".Most people think only early bird type person is desirable. >> Most people only think that an early bird type of person is desirable.Until now, maybe I've gotten others wrong with my personal judgement. >> Correct But we should understand the late worm type person. >> But we should understand the late worm type of person.It means we undestand different type of people from us.>> It means we understand different types of people among us.Flexible thought, creative mind..these things we should keep in mind. >> Flexible thoughts and creative mind, these are the things we should keep in mind.

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