Pokemon
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I love pokemon.I love pokemon card too.Sometimes my friends call me pokedmon doctorate.Because I know many pokemon so they call
me pokemon doctorate.So I have pokemon dictionary and english dictionary but, I can`t read english one but just in case.And I have many
pokemon card.It`s SO cool and SO expencive and SO awesome.That means I have many like lego,It`s too expensive like lego,Father don`t
like it because it`s expensive like lego.but I like it!
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Hello [이름] Ju! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy the holiday! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I love pokemon.
>> CORRECT!
I love pokemon card too.
>>I love Pokémon cards too.
Sometimes my friends call me pokedmon doctorate.
>> Sometimes, my friends call me the Pokémon expert.
Because I know many pokemon so they call
me pokemon doctorate.
>> Because I know a lot of Pokémon so they call me the Pokémon expert.
So I have pokemon dictionary and english dictionary but, I can`t read english one but just in case.
>> So I have a Pokémon dictionary and an English dictionary but, I can\'t read the English one because it\'s just in case I need to say their names in English.
And I have many
pokemon card.
>> And I have many Pokémon cards.
It`s SO cool and SO expencive and SO awesome.
>> They are so so awesome, expensive, and cool.
That means I have many like lego,
>> I have as many as my Lego collection.
It`s too expensive like lego,
>> It\'s too expensive like Lego.
Father don`t
like it because it`s expensive like lego.
>> My father doesn\'t like it because it\'s expensive like Lego.
but I like it!
>> But I like it.
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