Pokemon cards
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I love pokemon cards. There are comon,un comon,Rare,Dobble rare,super rare,Hiper rare and Ultra rare. Ultra rare is a gratest,and
comon is a lowest cards.So Ultra rare is expencive.I have 2 Ultra rares 2 Hiper rares 6 Super rares 26 Dobble rares and lots and lots and
l~~~ots of comons and uncomons.I wish I have a many Ultra rare.
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I love pokemon cards.
>> I love Pokémon cards.
There are comon,un comon,Rare,Dobble rare,super rare,Hiper rare and Ultra rare.
>> There are common, uncommon, rare, Double rare, super rare, hyper rare, and ultra-rare cards.
Ultra rare is a gratest,and
comon is a lowest cards.
>> Ultra rare is the greatest, and common is the lowest card.
So Ultra rare is expencive.
>> So ultra rare is expensive.
I have 2 Ultra rares 2 Hiper rares 6 Super rares 26 Dobble rares and lots and lots and
l~~~ots of comons and uncomons.
>> I have 2 ultra-rare, 2 hyper rare, 6 super rare, 26 double rare, and a lot of common and uncommon cards.
I wish I have a many Ultra rare.
>> I wish to have many ultra-rare cards.
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