political dynasties
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that political dynasties is another descent in modern society.
It is a hereditary system of vested power disguised democracy.
At last, parents\' social positions and economic ability are passed to their children.
It is not a fair society.
The starting line is different like caste system.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
Exactly! Parents nowadays are preparing a position for their children. They are securing a \"good future,\" thinking that this is good for their children.
Do you know Jackie Chan (Seong Ryong)? I admire him because, despite being successful, he doesn\'t have a plan to pass on his wealth to his son.
We understand that many parents are afraid of this; however, training our children to become better and successful person matters!
Aki~
I think that political dynasties is another descent in modern society.
>>> I think that political dynasties are another descent in modern society.
It is a hereditary system of vested power disguised democracy.
>>> It is a hereditary system of vested power disguised as democracy.
At last, parents\' social positions and economic ability are passed to their children.
>>> CORRECT!
It is not a fair society.
>>> CORRECT!
The starting line is different like caste system.
>>> The starting line is different, like the caste system.
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