politician think good method for earning money is house.
학생이 쓴 원문
I told you price in houses in korea.
and then I searched my house which I was going to buy before.
I am surprised about price.
Almost price goes up.
when I was searching to buy house one years ago.
some house\'s price didn`t go up for ten years.
other house`s price went down.
really really I was suprised price of house which i had before.
price goes up almost two hundred millions won.
I think price of house goes up continue.
The goverment make new policy .
but price of house goes up almost.
I think first reason
that politician want to earn money by selling house.
and second reason is alone policy can`t control that.
when i was a young. politician made earn money many method.
house was just one thing. but nowaday they are hard because of new policy and watcher of web.
I think they find new method. If they announce new policy .
almost people is good. after several years politician will make money.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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>>> I told you about the price of houses in Korea.
and then I searched my house which I was going to buy before.
and then I searched my house which I was going to buy before.
>>> Then I searched for the price of my house which I bought before.
I am surprised about price.
I am surprised about price.
>>> I am surprised of the price.
Almost price goes up.
Almost price goes up.
>>> The price went up.
when I was searching to buy house one years ago.some house\'s price didn`t go up for ten years.
when I was searching to buy house one years ago.some house\'s price didn`t go up for ten years.
>>> When I was searching for a house to buy a year ago, some house prices didn\'t go up for then years.
other house`s price went down.
>>> correct
really really I was suprised price of house which i had before.
really really I was suprised price of house which i had before.
>>> I was really surprised of the price of the house which I had before.
price goes up almost two hundred millions won.
price goes up almost two hundred millions won.
>>> The price went up for almost 2 million won.
I think price of house goes up continue.
I think price of house goes up continue.
>>> I think the price of houses will continue to go up.
The goverment make new policy .but price of house goes up almost.
The goverment make new policy .but price of house goes up almost.
>>> The government made a new policy but the prices of houses continue to go up.
I think first reason that politician want to earn money by selling house. and second reason is alone policy can`t control that.
>>> I think the first reason is that politicians want to earn money by selling houses and the second reason is the policy alone cannot control that.
when i was a young. politician made earn money many method.
when i was a young. politician made earn money many method.
>>> When I was young, politicians earned money in many ways.
house was just one thing. but nowaday they are hard because of new policy and watcher of web.
house was just one thing. but nowaday they are hard because of new policy and watcher of web.
>>>Houses was just one thing, but nowadays, they are havign a difficult time because of the policy and the people keeping watch on them online.
I think they find new method.
I think they find new method.
>>> I think they will find a new method.
If they announce new policy . almost people is good. after several years politician will make money.
If they announce new policy . almost people is good. after several years politician will make money.
>>> If they announce anew policy and almost all people agree to that, politicians will earn more money after several years.
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