Politicians vs. Scientists
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree scientists make the greatest contribution to the world with their good will.
Politicians also can have a great influence on the world, but anyone who have an influence can be a politician.
However, anyone cannot be scientists.
I think scientists contribute to make our life more convenient and safe based on their knowledge and good value.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]~! ^^ Good day to you!^^ Thanks for your diligence in doing your homework! If you make your internal life a priority, then everything else you need on the outside will be given to you and it will be extremely clear what the next step is. Keep on!
>> TEACHER GEMMA
I agree scientists make the greatest contribution to the world with their good will.
>>> I agree [that] scientists make the greatest contribution to the world with their good will.
>>> I agree [that] scientists make the greatest contribution to the world with their good will.
Politicians also can have a great influence in the world, but anyone who have an influence can be a politician.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, anyone cannot be scientists.
OR>>> However, not everyone can be scientists.
I think scientists contribute to make our life more convenient and safe based on their knowledge and good value.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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