politics
학생이 쓴 원문
Unfortunately Korean politics has turned back compare to the past.
I think that now is the crisis of democracy in Korea politics and society.
We have several reasons in all areas of society.
The worst thing is that we lost morality and citizenship.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
I think all countries have a problem with the structure of the government. The citizens give them power by voting for them without further background investigation, and commonly, the result is regret.
Aki~
Unfortunately, Korean politics has turned back compare to the past.
>>> Unfortunately, Korean politics has regressed compared to the past.
I think that now is the crisis of democracy in Korea politics and society.
>>> I think that now is the crisis of democracy in Korea\'s politics and society.
We have several reasons in all areas of society.
>>> CORRECT!
The worst thing is that we lost morality and citizenship.
>>> CORRECT!
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