Poor people
학생이 쓴 원문
1. It doesn\'t do that. Instead of foods, government give a money to people have economical problems called the National recipent of basic living.
2.I have not seen them. But I heard them from TV news before.
3. I have donated some money to starving people and Children ceter of poor people has taken care of the children after school program.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
It doesn\'t do that.
>>It doesn\'t go that way.
Instead of foods, government give a money to people have economical problems called the National recipent of basic living.
>> Instead of food, government give money to people who have economical problems called the National recipent of basic living.
I have not seen them.
>> Instead of food, government give money to people who have economical problems called the National recipent of basic living.
I have not seen them.
>>CORRECT!
But I heard them from TV news before.
>>CORRECT!
I have donated some money to starving people and Children ceter of poor people has taken care of the children after school program.>>I have donated some money to starving people and Children center of poor people has taken care of the children after school program.
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