Popcorn

2011-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Today, I ate popcorn at home. Not in the movie theater. My friend have gave me 2 popcorn boxes. So, me and my sister were too excited to wait for the popcorn to eat. because we didn't eat popcorn for a long time. We took the popcorn into the microwave and waited for 2 and a half minutes. It was so great!! But, if I eat too much, I'm going to be a pig. Oh Noooooo

강사 첨삭

Wow, popcorn! I love popcorn too!kkk... Its nice to hear that you ate popcorn again after a long time... Have a nice evening again... T.Rj   Today, I ate popcorn at home.  >>correct! Not in the movie theater.  >>correct! My friend have gave me 2 popcorn boxes.  >>correct! So, me and my sister were too excited to wait for the popcorn to eat.  >>correct! because we didn't eat popcorn for a long time.  >>correct! We took the popcorn into the microwave and waited for 2 and a half minutes.  >>correct! It was so great!!  >>correct! But, if I eat too much, I'm going to be a pig. Oh Noooooo >>correct!

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