Popular car amongst peer
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When I was in thirties, sports car was the most popular car amongst my peer because at that period of time we all thought that having a specific car represented a figure of a successful man. But now we all agree that the car which our wives want should be the one that we should buy because all the men lose their authorities.
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When I was in thirties, sports car was the most popular car amongst my peer because at that period of time we all thought that having a specific car represented a figure of a successful man.
>>When I was in my thirties, a sports car was the most popular one amongst my peers because at that period in time, we all thought that owning a specific car equates to a successful man.
But now we all agree that the car which our wives want should be the one that we should buy because all the men lose their authorities.
>>CORRECT
>>When I was in my thirties, a sports car was the most popular one amongst my peers because at that period in time, we all thought that owning a specific car equates to a successful man.
But now we all agree that the car which our wives want should be the one that we should buy because all the men lose their authorities.
>>CORRECT
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