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2021-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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At Christmas, my country is winter so I guess that the kind of warm stew are popular. I can\'t remember about it because I lived far from such cultural life for a long time. I\'ve never had a chance to experience that culture since I moved here, it means I\'m old. I think I\'m keeping the same every day for five years. I had enjoying to abroad golf in every winter,but now, I can\'t do that. You know the reason... Oh no... Go away from the Conoravirus.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Suzan! 
I know you miss travelling so much! 
Yes, it will be over soon and we would be able to see the world again^^ 

At Christmas, my country is winter so I guess that the kind of warm stew are popular.
>>> I think warm stews are popular because it\'s winter in Korea on Christmas.
I can\'t remember about it because I lived far from such cultural life for a long time.
>>> CORRECT! 
OR: I can\'t remember well because I live far away from such cultural life.
I\'ve never had a chance to experience that culture since I moved here, it means I\'m old.
>>> I haven\'t had a chance to experience the culture since I moved here. That means I am old.
I think I\'m keeping the same every day for five years.
>>> I think I\'ve been living the same life every day for 5 years.
I had enjoying to abroad golf in every winter,but now, I can\'t do that.
>>> I used to play golf overseas in winter, but now I can\'t.
You know the reason...
>>> CORRECT! 
Oh no...
>>> CORRECT! 
Go away from the Conoravirus.
>>> Go away coronavirus! 

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