Popular snack in Korea these days
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The three popular snacks in Korea these days are bungeoppang, fruit sticky rice cake, and fish cake.
Bungeoppang is a popular winter snack with red bean paste, custard cream, etc. inside a bread made of a fish-shaped mold. Fruit glutinous rice cake is a rice cake made of glutinous rice with red bean paste, fruits such as strawberries, tangerines, and green grapes, and is popular among students for its sweet and sour taste of red bean paste. Next is fish cake. It is sold with tteokbokki at street stalls, which can often be seen at convenience stores in Korea. It is easy to eat, warm, and delicious. You can see students eating it often.
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The three popular snacks in Korea these days are bungeoppang, fruit sticky rice cake, and fish cake.
Bungeoppang is a popular winter snack with red bean paste, custard cream, etc. inside a bread made of a fish-shaped mold.
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Bungeoppang is a popular winter snack with red bean paste, custard cream, etc. inside a bread made of a fish-shaped mold.
>> Bungeoppang is a popular winter snack filled with red bean paste, custard cream, and other fillings, shaped like a fish.
Fruit glutinous rice cake is a rice cake made of glutinous rice with red bean paste, fruits such as strawberries, tangerines, and green grapes, and is popular among students for its sweet and sour taste of red bean paste.
>> Fruit glutinous rice cake is made of glutinous rice filled with red bean paste and fruits such as strawberries, tangerines, and green grapes. It is popular among students for its sweet and slightly tangy taste.
Next is fish cake.
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It is sold with tteokbokki at street stalls, which can often be seen at convenience stores in Korea.
>> Fish cake is sold with tteokbokki at street stalls and convenience stores in Korea.
It is easy to eat, warm, and delicious.
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You can see students eating it often.
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