Popular sports in my country.

2011-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Most popular sports in Korea is baseball. People in my country really like it. There are many beaseball team in Korea. Big cities have their own team. and people supports their local team. Base ball is very popular because it is very exciting and we don't have to concentrate on the game countinuously. There is a break between each inning. We can also bring some food and enjoy eating it while watching the game. I my self don't like watching baseball. Because I am more of a soccer guy.

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What a wonderful Monday my dear [이름]! I absolutely agree that baseball is the most popular sport in Korea, as Ive heard from other students either. No further corrections noted, just keep up the good work... talk to you again later my dear... T.Cam  Most popular sports in Korea is baseball. >>The most popular sport in Korea is baseball.People in my country really like it. >>correct!There are many beaseball team in Korea. >>There are many baseball teams in Korea.Big cities have their own team. >>correct!and people supports their local team. >>and people support their local teams.Base ball is very popular because it is very exciting and we don't have to concentrate on the game countinuously. >>Baseball is very popular because it is very exciting and we don't have to concentrate on the game continuously.There is a break between each inning. >>correct!We can also bring some food and enjoy eating it while watching the game. >>correct!I my self don't like watching baseball. >>correct!Because I am more of a soccer guy. >>correct!

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