Pork party~^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Sarah!
A gorgeous Monday morning to you.
I really hope I can come to Korea and taste those delicious Korean food. ^^
Anyway, be careful with your punctuation marks and also with your spelling in your composition.
Have a fun day! Take care always!
See yah later!
~~T.Heidi _^-^_
Today\'s dinner is pork with rice!
>>Correct!
My mom roasted pork a lot.
>>My mom roasted a lot of pork.
I ate rice wrapped in greens with pork~!
>>Correct!
Oh~ Delicious~!! I love it!
>>Oh! Delicious. I love it!
And diped the pork into the sauce~
>>And I dipped the pork into the sauce.~
Wow~ Very delcious~!
>>Wow! Very delicious!~
Next time, I will eat pork hocks~^^
>>Next time, I will eat pork hocks.~^^
When you come to Korea, I want to choose pork~^^
>>When you come to Korea, I want you to try pork.~^^
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