Pork party~^^

2013-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

학생이 쓴 원문

Today's dinner is pork with rice! My mom roasted pork a lot. I ate rice wrapped in greens with pork~! Oh~ Delicious~!! I love it! And diped the pork into the sauce~ Wow~ Very delcious~! Next time, I will eat pork hocks~^^ When you come to Korea, I want to choose pork~^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sarah!

A gorgeous Monday morning to you.
I really  hope I can come to Korea and taste those delicious Korean food. ^^
Anyway, be careful with your punctuation marks
and also with your spelling in your composition.

Have a fun day! Take care always!

See yah later!

~~T.Heidi _^-^_

Today\'s dinner is pork with rice!

>>Correct!
My mom roasted pork a lot.

>>My mom roasted a lot of pork.

I ate rice wrapped in greens with pork~!

>>Correct!
Oh~ Delicious~!! I love it!

>>Oh! Delicious. I love it!
And diped the pork into the sauce~

>>And I dipped the pork into the sauce.~
Wow~ Very delcious~!

>>Wow! Very delicious!~
Next time, I will eat pork hocks~^^

>>Next time, I will eat pork hocks.~^^
When you come to Korea, I want to choose pork~^^

>>When you come to Korea, I want you to try pork.~^^

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