possible causes
학생이 쓴 원문
Human nature draws more to the bad than to the good.
People can have a positive habit if they get a lot of love since they were young and grow up.
Or maybe genetic factors can affect it
Withal a good conscience knows that you can`t go on.
Moderation leads life to success little by little.
If people eat a lot of food, it`s poisonous
Like love becomes an obsession.
I also want to live a happier life with good habits.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for always making your homework. It is very much appreciated. You did great.
Here are your corrections:
>> Human nature is drawn more towards the bad than the good.
>> People can become positive if they were loved from when they were young up until they grow up.
>> Genetic factors might affect it.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> If people eat a lot of food, they will get poisoned.
>> (I\'m not sure what you meant here) It doesn\'t have a complete thought.
>> CORRECT
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