Possible challenges
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I am not sure what kind of difficulties will be when traveling with my friends. My friends and l aren\'t stubborn but open and flexible in many ways. And they are easygoing, so I can\'t imagine any conflict with us. I just hope that we can keep our condition healthy ~
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I think this plan to study abroad for a month with friends who are not very close and have you as their only connection is really interesting. I really hope that you get the most out of it since it’s also a new experience for you!
- T. Caitlyn
I am not sure what kind of difficulties will be when traveling with my friends.
>> I am not sure what kind of difficulties will arise when traveling with my friends.
My friends and l aren\'t stubborn but open and flexible in many ways.
>> My friends and I aren\'t stubborn but are open and flexible in many ways.
And they are easygoing, so I can\'t imagine any conflict with us.
>> They are easygoing, so I can\'t imagine any conflict among us.
I just hope that we can keep our condition healthy
>> I just hope that we can stay healthy.
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