Possible reasons
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What are the possible reasons that push some to give up on something or someone? First, if something is bad for someone\'s health. Second, if something gives damage to other people.
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First, if something is bad for someone\'s health.
>> Correct
OR >> It is okay to give up if something is bad for someone\'s health.
Second, if something gives damage to other people.
Correct
OR >> It is also okay to give up if something causes harm to other people
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