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Do you see it? Second is my score. Amazing right?. It\'s my highest score in my life. But I should try to be a perfect game that is 300 score. During that time, I played the bowling with my friend. We were going to play that after we got a little bit of bear with chicken. :)
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Hi Elic! Thank you so much for taking the time to do your daily homework. I appreciate your efforts very much. John C. Maxwell once said, \"The only guarantee for failure is to stop trying.\" So you should never stop trying even though it gets a little bit challenging because I know you will succeed. Again, thank you for your efforts! I am so proud of you!
>> Correct.
Second is my score.
>> The second one is my score.
Amazing right?.
>> Isn\'t it amazing?
It\'s my highest score in my life. But I should try to be a perfect game that is 300 score.
>> It\'s the highest score I\'ve ever gotten in my life, but want to try and score a perfect 300 next time.
During that time, I played the bowling with my friend.
>> During that time, I played bowling with my friend.
We were going to play that after we got a little bit of bear with chicken. :)
>> We played it after we had a little bit of beer and chicken.
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