posting
학생이 쓴 원문
When teachers post students to some media, they should be very careful.
We have obligation to protect studeent\'s privacy and human rights.
Nowdays mahy people want to attract others attention.
I think it is a kind of mental disease.
Basically they lack an identity and have low self-esteem.
강사 첨삭
Hi. Ms. [이름]!
Definitely agree with you! Teacher\'s have responsibilities to protect their students and sadly, not all teachers have that kind of attitude toward their students. I feel upset whenever I see a teacher doing a dance TikTok on social media. I understand that is =s their way of expressing themselves, however, their professionalism is compromised.
See you!
Aki~
When teachers post students to some media, they should be very careful.
>>>When teachers post students on social media, they should be very careful.
We have obligation to protect students\' privacy and human rights.
>>> CORRECT!!
Nowdays mahy people want to attract others attention.
>>> Nowadays many people want to attract others\' attention.
I think it is a kind of mental disease.
>>> CORRECT!
Basically, they lack an identity and have low self-esteem.
>>> CORRECT!
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