Power English homework : Writing what I mostly do in my weekends.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! I am [Name] and I was so glad to meet you today. My real name is Christine, but I found another beutiful name and it is \'Heather\'. So, I mostly go to Anyang, or do (ON & UP) and homework. In Sunday I go to church. BYE! Ms. [Name]!
강사 첨삭
Hello Christine. Both Christine and Heather are nice names. Thank you for sending me your homework.
Hi! I am [Name] and I was so glad to meet you today.
>>I am [Name] and so glad to meet you today.
My real name is Christine, but I found another beutiful name and it is \'Heather\'.
>>May English name is Christine but I found the beautiful name, it is \"Heather.\"
So, I mostly go to Anyang, or do (ON & UP) and homework.
>>So, I mostly go to Anyang or do my homework on the weekend.
In Sunday I go to church.
>>I go to church on Sunday.
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