power english program #part 2
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi I am [Name]-Hee-Jung. I'm not Yoon-[이름].
Hm......... I want to speak english well. Because when I trevel to USA I want to speak with USA people. So I like power english.Because It help me to I am speak english well. And my dream is scientist. Scientists are speak english very well. So I want to study english.
강사 첨삭
Hello Yoon Hee Jung! :)
The spelling of your name in my account is different. I\'m sorry. :) Anyway, if you really want to speak English very well you have to practice everyday. You have to speak in English, try watching English shows or movies and follow the way they speak and pronounce the words. Those are some ways where you can practice your English skills, okay? :)
Hi I am [Name]-Hee-Jung.
>>CORRECT!
I\'m not Yoon-[이름].
>>CORRECT!Hm......... I want to speak english well.
>>CORRECT!
>>I want to be a good English speaker.
Because when I trevel to USA I want to speak with USA people.
>>When I travel to USA I want to talk with Americans.
So I like power english.Because It help me to I am speak english well.
>>That\'s why I like Power English because they help me speak English well.
And my dream is scientist.
>>My dream is to become a scientist.
Scientists are speak english very well.
>>Scientists can speak English very well.
So I want to study english.
>>CORRECT!
>>That\'s why I want to study English.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.