powerful week

2014-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Kathrine! Did you have a nice weekend? It came back new a week again for us. I expect that we have a happy week more. It's raining little by little since the Saturday. I am feeling that everything was cleaned. The sky, trees, roads, air...... Let's start a week forcefully. Fighting!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mr. [이름]!

I did have a good weekend.

How about you? I hope you had a good one.

Please tell me more about it later.
See you!


Always,
Kathrine ^^



Hi, Kathrine!
>>  correct!
Did you have a nice weekend?

>>  correct!
 It came back new a week again for us.

>>  A new came for us again.
 I expect that we have a happy week more.
>>   I am expecting that we will have a happier week.
It\'s raining little by little since the Saturday.

>>  It is raining form time to time since last Saturday.
 I am feeling that everything was cleaned.

>>  I felt that everything was cleaned.
 The sky, trees, roads, air......
>>  correct!
Let\'s start a week forcefully.
>>  
correct! 
Fighting!!

>>  correct!

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