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2013-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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Hannah, i'm so sorry to upload too many scripts at once. these are not urgent. so please take carefreeness! this practice and your correction are very helful to me. thank you all the time! Q29 : when studying for an exam, some students spend long hours to cover everything but some students spend few hours and memorize important points. Which do you think is better? I usually memorize just important thing rather than studying everything. Studying everything is a waste of my time. Let me take an example of my cases, last year, I had to get a high score of TOEIC. But I was so busy. So I studied just important points only. And I could get a high score. Q30: in order to have a great personal networking, do you think you should hang out with your acquaintances? in order to have a great personal networking I don’t think that we should hang out with your acquaintances. I don’t have enough time to meet my friends. On the other hand, in Korea, there are many social network services such as Facebook, Twiter, and so on. I use them frequently to talk with my friends. I can hang out consistently with them without meeting in person by using SNS.

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Hey there!^^ Hahaha yeah, but it\'s fine no worries! I\'ll do everything I can to correct them all this day,kkk. See you! ~t. Hannah~ Hannah, i\'m so sorry to upload too many scripts at once. >>Correct! these are not urgent. >>Correct! so please take carefreeness! >>So it\'s okay if it takes time for you to check them.  this practice and your correction are very helful to me. >>I have to practice and your corrections are very much helpul.thank you all the time!>>Thank you so much!Q29 : when studying for an exam, some students spend long hours to cover everything but some students spend few hours and memorize important points. Which do you think is better?I usually memorize just important thing rather than studying everything. >>I usually memorize the improtant ones rather than studying everything.Studying everything is a waste of my time. >>Correct!Let me take an example of my cases, last year, I had to get a high score of TOEIC. >>Correct!But I was so busy. >>Correct! So I studied just important points only >>So I studeied important parts only. . And I could get a high score. >>Correct!Q30: in order to have a great personal networking, do you think you should hang out with your acquaintances?in order to have a great personal networking I don’t think that we should hang out with your acquaintances. >>In order to have agreat personal networking, I don\'t think that hanging out with our acquintances would actually be of help.I don’t have enough time to meet my friends. >>Correct!On the other hand, in Korea, there are many social network services such as Facebook, Twiter, and so on. >>Correct!I use them frequently to talk with my friends. >>Correct!I can hang out consistently with them without meeting in person by using SNS. >>Correct!

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